Persephone’s Pool – Book Tour and Giveaway

 

New Age Crime Thriller That Will Leave You Breathless From Shock And Excitement!

‘Sci-fi and mystery readers shouldn’t miss this one!’

– Readers Favorite

 

Persephone’s Pool

by Marie Montine

Genre: SciFi Crime Thriller

 

 

“The settings and the unusual killings make for compelling, often unexpected material…A detailed, futuristic detective story that is anything but typical.” – Kirkus Reviews

“A scrumptious mix of suspense, mystery, and intrigue makes Persephone’s Pool a delightful treat that sci-fi and crime lovers will relish.” – Pikasho Deka for Readers’ Favorite


Seven meets Lucy in this New Age Crime Thriller that takes investigators to different crime scenes on multiple planets on a dangerous, mythological game of cat and mouse!

A hundred years from now people can visit any planet in the solar system and take a vacation.
Despite all of the technological advancements, a new craving emerges: spirituality.
With the Age of Aquarius on the threshold, intergalactic murders involving mythology begin.
And it’s up to two investigators to find out why.
But the further they get into their investigation, the more dangerous the game becomes.


‘Author Marie Montine repeatedly pulls the rug out from under your feet with a plot featuring multiple twists and turns you never see coming. The reveals are unexpected and shocking. What impressed me is how Montine provides each character with enough urgency and distinct personality traits so that the reader is completely invested in their story arcs. The setting feels believably futuristic, which makes the story very immersive. You don’t know if your favorite characters will make it out alive, and it keeps you on the edge of your seat. Sci-fi and mystery readers shouldn’t miss this one!’ – Readers Favorite

 

 

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Chapter One

Nyx’s Tricks

         

Eloise’s stomach turned as she tried to gather her bearings in the darkness. She felt lost and disoriented. She reached out with her hands, but they felt light as air and failed to make contact with any walls.

In the distance, four lights broke through the blackness.

Did she drink so much alcohol that she was wasted, staggering through someone else’s hallway after a night of partying?

The lights turned into doorways, and loud laughter radiated from one of them. She moved closer to the door, which pulsed with happiness. The door opened. A five-year-old girl was chasing a bunny with long, messy hair.

It was Eloise’s pet, Muffin!

Without logic or reason, Eloise hurried through the door.

 

Eloise flew out of the chamber and nearly fell over onto a grated metal floor.

A group of technicians ran over to help steady her before moving her to a chair.

“Do you know who you are and where you are?” asked a scientist in a white spacesuit.

Eloise looked around the room. She was in a space station. Her astral projection had successfully latched onto a host in the form of a robotic body. But the rate of recovery and integrated hand-eye coordination was astounding; she raised her arm with no issue.

She shook her head, recalling what the technicians back on Earth at Asteria Applications—the company responsible for creating humanoid hosts—had said: For consciousness to find its destination in the void, the person needed to recall a vivid memory for the OBE traveler to clutch onto. When she had entered the door, she entered the host’s body.

And one of Eloise’s triggering memories was chasing her pet bunny, Muffin.

“I’m Eloise Mayer. I’m assisting PAAS—Pluto Alliance Armed Services—on a murder investigation.”

Eloise found it so strange to be somewhere else, hearing herself talk in a different voice, and being in a body that she could sense but not really feel. She didn’t have an itch, and she didn’t feel hot or cold. She didn’t feel hungry or full, heavy or light. She felt like she was in a VR game, her mind the controller.

After Eloise completed a cognitive assessment, a tall man walked into the room. He wore a black spacesuit with a purple insignia on his shoulder revealing he was with Pluto Forces, a team of soldiers who handled everything on Pluto from security to military.

He held out his hand. “Ahmed Ryker.”

Eloise willed her hand to extend to his in greeting. It was just like being in her own body except for the loss of touch.

“You’ve got a firm grip, Miss Mayer,” Ahmed said with a smile, his teeth white and pristine against his brown face.

“I’m just not used to this body yet,” she said, looking around the room for a technician. “Could I have a mirror, please?”

A scientist handed her one, and Eloise thanked her. She held up the purple-rimmed glass and saw someone else looking back at her. The automaton she inhabited—a green-blood, as they were commonly known—had dark hair and blue eyes, unlike her own red hair and green eyes. The skin’s texture was realistic; she wished she could touch it with her own hands to see how it really felt.

Another scientist walked into the small room with a man who looked like a blond Ken doll and who walked just as stiffly.

“Greetings from Mars,” the Ken doll said. “My name is Aiden Geth from the United Nations Interplanetary Council, Investigations—UNIC Investigations, for short.” He marched to Eloise as if his knees were locked. “You must be Eloise Mayer from Earth, uh, Sky …”

When his voice trailed away, Eloise finished for him. “From Sky Script Services, on Earth. I have a doctorate in astrological studies, including astrochemistry and astrophysics.”

Aiden’s robot didn’t respond or even make a move. Either his bot had malfunctioned, or he was processing what she had said. Normally it was the latter whenever she told someone her title; her country was the only one in the Western world that gave an astrologer that title, provided the student also studied astrophysics. It was not long ago that the two were one and the same.

“If you’re ready and oriented with your host, Mr. Geth, I would like to get to it,” Eloise said, letting one of the scientists help her into a lightweight black spacesuit which would allow her to blend in with the public and not arouse curiosity.

 

Eloise looked out of the window of the transport shuttle sliding down the cable as the shuttle plunged toward Pluto’s surface. She didn’t know how high up they were, but it was enough to make her feel nauseated. She worried she may lose connection to her host and awake in her own body, botching her first investigation.

Be in the here and now, her mind whispered, returning her full attention to her surroundings.

The planet’s surface was charcoal gray in some areas, red in others. Massive snow-topped mountains clawed ten thousand feet into the sky. The distant sunlight reminded her of an eclipse; long shadows stretched across the frozen, rocky terrain as if a bright moon cast its light transversely. What struck her as the most awe-inspiring was Charon, the massive moon in the sky. It was so large, she fretted it could fall any time and crush them all like a boulder on an anthill.

She looked at Aiden next to her, who grinned inside his black space mask.

Ahmed’s brows were furrowed as he looked down at his holotab.

“What’s so funny?” Eloise asked the Ken-bot.

“Just that a country girl from Canada is in a place like this. She is way out of her league.” Aiden gazed at her smugly. He took off his helmet and ran his hand through his synthetic hair.

“Oh, let me guess. You don’t appreciate your organization dumbing down to my level of expertise,” Eloise said with a sigh. “You know, with the global revolt against AI, that spirituality is on the rise again? You better get with the program.”

Aiden didn’t respond right away. “Just don’t get your panties in a bunch, Ellie, with what you’re going to see out there.”

“I don’t wear panties.” Eloise regretted saying it the moment it spilled out; she was more of a lady than that. She was glad her mechanical stand-in couldn’t blush. “And you can call me Dr. Mayer; only my friends call me Ellie.”

Her statement quieted Aiden. When she stole a glance at him, she was sure that his grin this time came from genuine amusement and respect.

Ahmed looked up at them both. “You two aren’t going to have a problem working together, right?”

“No, no, we’re fine,” Eloise said, turning her attention back to the window. She was a little angry and annoyed that this new partner of hers was taking away from her experience of such a remarkable planet. She had been informed that Pluto was for the rich and elite—thanks to the hefty price tag of one million U.S. credits — who really wanted to get away from it all. She looked down at the docking station as they approached, and at the massive domed city in the distance. Against the dark backdrop of the planet, the lights glowed within like an amusement park.

“How long does it actually take someone to travel here?” Eloise breathed, captivated by the planet.

“It takes five years, so for most, it’s their final destination,” Ahmed said. “For me, I’ll stay here until I retire. Ninety-nine percent of the population are red-bloods; the green-bloods are reserved for the ones who want to take a vacation here without actually coming here, or for top-secret missions like yours. But honestly, not many people know how to successfully connect their consciousness to an android host, so it’s not a popular way to travel. We have a host at our precinct, but I have never been able to use it successfully. Hell, I can’t even meditate.”

“Must have been a pretty penny to send us both up here,” Aiden said.

Ahmed nodded. “It was.”

“So, let’s not disappoint,” Eloise said.

The transport came to a smooth stop, and they put their helmets back on. The door slid open, and a security woman greeted them asking to check their IDs. Once they were verified, they followed Ahmed into a windowed tunnel that led to the first domed city.

“Welcome to Nix, where you can get your kicks, as the saying goes—but don’t quote me on that,” Ahmed said. “Go to the murder scene and don’t deviate from your destination, or we will immediately disengage you from your host.”

Eloise pictured her body in a capsule-like bed chamber where nothing could touch her or else her consciousness would automatically reconnect with her physical self.

“So we can’t get our kicks here,” Aiden said, feigning disappointment. “Not much of a tour guide, but I heard you’re one helluva star soldier.”

Ahmed gave the blond automaton a look Eloise couldn’t read.

They walked the gravel streets toward two-story buildings, the area reminding her of a modern, colorful Western world. They passed one museum shop showcasing black, eel-like creatures slithering in water tanks. Ahmed said that deep within Pluto, there were warm oceans full of life, and the eels were one of the natural species.

While Pluto’s fragile ground prevented the construction of tall buildings, the places—and even the people—appeared futuristic: Shops lured people in with colorful holographic posters and signs, and spacesuits glowed with LED lights. Visitors had to wear spacesuits while they ventured in the domes; while the domes provided some barrier from the planet’s radiation, it wasn’t 100%. The suits displayed the health status of the person wearing it—as well as the suit itself—with electroluminescent backlighting. She could only imagine what the radiation would do to a person should the dome or suits fail. But apparently, some people thrived on living on the edge, another reason for a well-off person who already had it all wanting to move here.

Aiden was watching her. “The surface can cave in at any time and crumble like an eggshell if this planet gets close enough to the sun.”

“That will be in about 245 years,” Eloise said, glancing at him. “Maybe we’ll come up with something by then. I’d be more worried about the radiation risk this planet poses.”

Aiden studied her but remained silent.

They walked up the stairs of a two-story building, the corridor blocked by digital police tape. Ahmed used his holotab to disengage the digital holography signage. He swiped the electronic door lock with his wristband, and they entered the apartment.

“You two are lucky you can’t smell this place,” the soldier said, putting a clear mask over his nose. “Follow me this way.”

They walked to the last room. When they entered, it became clear why she was asked to be included on this investigation.

On the floor rested Trevor Ikeda, blood pooled around him. The slender, dark-haired Japanese man in his forties had deep cuts on both his stomach and forehead, the latter more of a puncture.

Eloise cried out and jumped back, right into Aiden’s arms. He smiled self-indulgently as he looked down at her, one hand around her waist, his other hand on her hips. She straightened herself and studied the room, moving as far away from him as the room allowed.

“I gather this is your first time seeing a deceased person,” Ahmed said.

Eloise nodded, stealing a glance at Aiden, whose gaze lingered on her.

“Then I apologize on behalf of PAAS, for our misinformation,” the Indian soldier said. “We should’ve had the body removed before your arrival and given you images to work with instead.”

“Thank you,” Eloise said. “I appreciate your concern. I’m fine now.”

She wasn’t fine. She needed a minute to collect herself, so she moved about the room, wondering if she should run out or even disengage from her synthetic host. All she had to do was press a button on the humanoid’s forearm, which would activate physical stimulation on her real body and bring her back instantaneously; the soul had an easier time returning to its physical body than it did leaving it.

Be a professional, she chastised herself. She breathed deeply, pretending to look over various objects. She reached into her pocket for her meds and stopped herself, remembering she was in a synth body.

When her panic attack subsided, she focused on what was in front of her.

On a desk was a staff, a warrior’s helm, and a small handmade chariot. On the wall hung a pitchfork, as well as paintings of three dogs. All on its own on another wall, was a portrait of a beautiful woman with long brown hair and purple eyes, with green just around the pupils. Directly across from this painting, on the opposite wall, was a startling image of a woman with snakes for hair.

What did the star Algol have to do with the rest of the room? She wondered, turning away from the image that was nothing short of disturbing.

“This place is rife with mythology,” she said, glancing at her partner. “And you’re bothered by my background?”

“How so?” Aiden asked.

“The victim,” Eloise began, “turned this room into one of devotion. He worshipped the god of the underworld. The objects on the table represent the things he used, and the objects on the wall represent the things he adored. The mat on the floor was where he meditated. He was so obsessed with the god of the underworld that he even came here, to the god’s planet, Pluto.”

Ahmed finished tapping on his holotab before he asked, “Does this room reveal why he did this to the victim?”

Eloise kneeled and looked at the wounds; she exhaled a shaky breath. The victim was wearing a black onyx necklace.

It suddenly became clear.

“He wasn’t meditating to the planet,” Eloise breathed. “He was siphoning from it, absorbing it, and someone interrupted him.”

“What do you mean by absorbing the planet?” Aiden asked.

“Everything in our universe comprises matter and energy. Each planet has its own unique signature. This man was inhaling the essence of this planet and feeding it into his own energy.” She pointed to his abdomen. “See the wound on the lower belly? That’s the sacral chakra, an area of energy ruled by two planets, one of them being Pluto.”

The men looked at each other in silence.

Ahmed’s holotab lit up, and he skimmed over the message. “The UNIC’s investigations department wants to have you instated as a full-time associate, meaning as an assisting civilian.”

Eloise’s mouth dropped open. “Full time? Is this not an isolated incident?”

Ahmed moved closer to Eloise, holding the small, flat electronic device level. A hologram of an aging woman in a gray suit with a slicked-back ponytail emerged from the holotab.

“No, Ms. Mayer, we don’t believe it is,” Chancellor Winnifred North of the Intergalactic Colonies Committee said. “Your partner’s murder proves this is only the beginning.”

Eloise looked at Aiden. “What? But …”

Aiden’s automaton stood with his head lowered, as if he had fallen asleep standing.

“Somebody just killed him? Now?” Eloise’s voice rose. They weren’t particularly getting along, but she didn’t wish him dead, either.

Was she next?

Ahmed put the holotab on the table and reached for his gun. He then stepped in front of Eloise, pointing the gun at the door.

Eloise sensed a presence nearby, but there was no one else in the room.

“No, Ms. Mayer, that wasn’t him,” the chancellor said from the holotab. “Someone killed your partner five hours ago. The person using Aiden’s synth may have been the killer himself.”

 

 

 

Marie Montine’s work includes paranormal horror, supernatural sci-fi, and dark fantasy. But there’s always one major theme in her stories: the power of love.

 

Many readers and reviewers have claimed Marie Montine is an author to watch for.

Red River won an award for best romantic suspense with ChickLit Cafe.

 

She recently finished writing Persephone’s Pool, an intergalactic crime thriller released on April 8, 2025.

The author is also a level one student with CAAE and you can find her love of astrology woven into stories like Midnight on Mars and Persephone’s Pool.

 

Marie lives and works in northern Canada with her husband and poet, Alvin J Beck, and their dogs, Luna and Mya. When she is not working or writing, she enjoys gaming and getting cozied up with her husband and dogs watching movies or tv series.

 

 

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What inspired you to write this book?

I was in a bad place more than a decade ago, very lost, got to the point of self-destruction. There was a stranger who bumped into me one day, and told me things about life, things that clicked with me because these were things I was always interested in but never pursued. Something happened that day, it sparked my mind and my soul. This book I wrote is actually the product of that day, the culmination of my life turning around, finding my true love, and getting back into writing. This book represents what the stranger told me.

 

What can we expect from you in the future?

I would actually love to write more crime thrillers based on astrology like Persephone’s Pool.

 

How did you come up with the concept and characters for the book?

I have been wanting to write this story for a while. I knew I wanted one that had more astrological prevalence, and I wanted to do it in a fun way, to showcase how awesome mythology and astrology can be.

 

What did you enjoy most about writing this book?

I think the whole process was enjoyable because this was actually the easiest story I had ever written because when they say the book wrote itself, well, this one did! And didn’t have to do too much research like I did with Midnight on Mars because I already knew so much astrology.

Tell us about your main characters- what makes them tick?

The main characters are Hades and Persephone, (for spoiler reasons, I can not reveal the characters’ names) and while they are in their current incarnation, they act out of their current personalities, needs and wants. But in their soul’s undercurrent swims a need from past incarnations, and careful readers will see this manifest throughout the story until the climax. Will Persephone fall victim once again to Hades’ power and control? Or will she break and free and create her own power?

 

Anything specific you want to tell your readers?

Many of my books have a common theme of Hades and Persephone, of love vs hate, light vs dark. And of sacrificing for love. Two of novels contain astrology in there: Persephone’s Pool, and Midnight on Mars. I hope people don’t mind that and love the characters as much as I do.

 

How did you come up with the title of your first novel?

Haha this is a kind of funny one. So, I’ve always known my Empia trilogy would be about light and dark and the balance of that energy. So, while I was writing my first book ( I was actually in my late teens) I didn’t have a name for it. I was riding the bus to high school and on the wall was written ‘Mourning Grey’. I loved it right away; I knew that was the title. I just hope my book isn’t named after a gang lol. The subsequent novels became Arising Son, and Sol of the Knight, a play of the dark vs light themes.

If you had to do it all over again, would you change anything in your latest book?

No, once my books are written, its written. The end.

If your book was made into a film, who would you like to play the lead?

For Eloise, I can picture an actress like Jessica Chastain, for Janice I can see Ana De Armas, and for the killer (name hidden for spoiler reasons) for sure I can see Gerard Butler or a younger Vincent D’Onofrio.

  

How did you come up with name of this book?

 I’ve always been intrigued by the mythology of Persephone and always wanted to write about her. I added the ‘pool’ part because it signifies many things (like the element of water, and how it connects to emotion and the soul).

What is your favorite part of this book and why?

 Oh gosh, can I say the whole thing? But I think the ending is one of my favorites because I believe it will be the most surprising for readers on who makes it out alive, and it has an Indiana Jones kind of vibe to it, but in a sci-fi/metaphysical way!

Are your characters based off real people or did they all come entirely from your imagination?

My characters are all purely from my imagination, but I’m sure people I’ve known and loved have had some influence, too.

Do your characters seem to hijack the story or do you feel like you have the reigns of the story?

Oh yes, my characters hijack the story completely. I don’t know where they come from, but they have all the control.

 

Convince us why you feel your book is a must read.

This book is a must-read because you have never read anything like this! I promise you that. If you want to experience a read that keeps you guessing and knocks your socks off, then read this!

If your book had a candle, what scent would it be?

Black Cherry Merlot

 

What did you edit out of this book?

 Actually nothing.

 

Is there an writer which brain you would love to pick for advice? Who would that be and why?

I would love to talk to Stephen King. I would like to know stuff like do his characters take hostage while he is writing, too?

 

51 Comments

  1. Lisa Brown

    I love sci-fi reads; thanks for the chance to win and read :)

  2. Michele Soyer

    Just love the title..Can’t wait to read it….

  3. Cindy Merrill

    Have not read the book as of yet, but I certainly intend to do so.

  4. heather

    I would love to read this one this spring season it sounds like a good one for sure!

  5. Wendy Jensen

    Sounds like a great thriller.

  6. Susan Smith

    This sounds like a good SciFi Crime Thriller book. I like the cover.

  7. Melissa Cushing

    Looks like such a good read and I am always for a good sci fi book ;)

  8. wendy hutton

    this sounds like an interesting book

  9. Cathy French

    I love thriller reads. This has a great cover

  10. Marcy Meyer

    I like the excerpt. Sounds really good.

  11. paige chandler

    I love a sci-fi thriller. They are hard to find. Good work.

  12. Serge B

    Nice writing, I enjoyed the excerpt

  13. Soha Molina

    What inspired you to become a writer?

    • Marie Montine

      Hi Soha
      Thank you for the question. check out the blogs and Guest Post (scroll above) for answers to that and so much more!

  14. Thomas Gibson

    The cover art is amazing.

  15. Ann Fantom

    This sounds like an interesting book and I also like the cover.

  16. David Hollingsworth

    Congratulations on your book!

  17. David Basile

    Looks like a great thriller.

  18. Heather Swanson

    Looks very exciting Do you write in a daily journal?

    • Marie Montine

      Hi Heather
      I actually don’t write in a daily journal, but I think I might start doing so – many other authors do and for good reason I’m sure. Thank you for your question.

  19. Piroska

    The book sounds very intriguing. Love the pretty cover.

  20. Sherry

    This sounds like an interesting read. I love the cover and the excerpt.

  21. Jeanna Massman

    This combination of genres is intriguing! I like the cover art!

  22. Julie Bickham

    I look forward to reading.

  23. Cynthia C

    The excerpt is interesting. Thank you for sharing it.

  24. Barbara Montag

    Crime thriller – I have to read this!
    Thank you for sharing.

  25. Carol G

    Sounds like a good one for my TBR pile.

  26. Virginia Hafer

    Sounds like a good read with a great mix of mystery and the paranormal.

  27. Joe Titone

    Looks like a very interesting read! The details make me want it to be my next read. No questions for the author.

  28. Elaine G

    Enjoyed reading the post. Sounds like a good book

  29. Marie Montine

    Hi everyone. Thank you so much for the lovely comments! Good luck to you all on the giveaway!

  30. Dreaa Drake

    This sounds like an amazing book love the colors of the cover! Deff added to my tbr!

  31. Carolyn D

    I am glad you found encouragement from a stranger to pursue your passion. I love that you got the title for your first book from writing on a wall on your way to or from school.

  32. Robin Abrams

    I love this book cover. I can not wait to read this book

  33. Ellie Wright

    Sounds like a great book. I’m looking forward to reading it.

  34. Michelle Domangue

    Looks like a great book

  35. jason jennings

    sound good cant wait to read it

  36. Leigh Nichols

    Futuristic detective story? I’m in!!

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